課件出示:爸爸非常熱愛(ài)自己的工作,也很愛(ài)家。(添加中心句:有了中心句,就能統(tǒng)領(lǐng)整段,保證話題的統(tǒng)一)首先,爸爸是一個(gè)熱愛(ài)工作的人。(“首先”一句,領(lǐng)起下文對(duì)爸爸熱愛(ài)工作的描述,照應(yīng)中心句的前半句)爸爸工作出色,在單位經(jīng)常被評(píng)為先進(jìn)工作者,我們家墻上貼的那些獎(jiǎng)狀有很多都是爸爸的。爸爸不僅上班忙工作,下了班都在惦記工作。(調(diào)整句子順序:把“爸爸不僅……下了班都……”調(diào)到了前面,使句子順序合理)記得有一次,爸爸單位里有臺(tái)機(jī)器壞了,大家修了一天都找不出問(wèn)題。爸爸下班回到家里,吃飯時(shí)突然想起了國(guó)外有這方面的材料,就馬上查閱了資料,并且連夜趕回單位搶修機(jī)器,終于把機(jī)器修好了。(運(yùn)用具體事例表明“爸爸不僅上班忙工作,下了班都在惦記工作”)其次,爸爸還是一個(gè)非常愛(ài)家的人。(“其次”一句,領(lǐng)起下文對(duì)爸爸愛(ài)家的描述,照應(yīng)中心句的后半句)爸爸會(huì)花很多時(shí)間陪家人。周末,他常會(huì)領(lǐng)著全家人去郊游。為此,他還專門買了本地郊區(qū)旅游攻略的書(shū),研究了好多條路線。
(3)從“取笑”的鬧劇中,你心里生發(fā)出哪些感觸?學(xué)生自主思考,交流展示。預(yù)設(shè):作者表達(dá)了對(duì)劉姥姥這位社會(huì)底層的農(nóng)村老婦的悲憫和尊敬;通過(guò)劉姥姥的眼睛映射出賈府豪奢、腐朽的景象,對(duì)賈府的腐敗沒(méi)落進(jìn)行了側(cè)面批判;告訴我們生活不易,要珍惜當(dāng)下?!驹O(shè)計(jì)意圖】經(jīng)典作品,在于其藝術(shù)性和思想性,深讀側(cè)重于引導(dǎo)學(xué)生以《劉姥姥進(jìn)大觀園》為例指導(dǎo)學(xué)生課外閱讀《紅樓夢(mèng)》,達(dá)到課內(nèi)學(xué)法課外實(shí)踐,真正落實(shí)語(yǔ)文核心素養(yǎng)的目的。六、拓讀,學(xué)以致用之微寫(xiě)作模仿文中第7段對(duì)眾人各具情態(tài)又繪聲繪色的笑態(tài)的描寫(xiě),描寫(xiě)在運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)上班級(jí)獲得團(tuán)體冠軍那一刻同學(xué)們和老師的不同神態(tài),并以此表現(xiàn)不同人物的特點(diǎn)?!驹O(shè)計(jì)意圖】捕捉寫(xiě)作微寫(xiě)作點(diǎn),常態(tài)化訓(xùn)練微寫(xiě)作,是提高學(xué)生寫(xiě)作能力的最佳途徑。學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)典小說(shuō)的經(jīng)典寫(xiě)法,更是勝過(guò)教師講解任何寫(xiě)作技巧。
生4:電子游戲還有世界大賽?!澜珉娮佑螒虼筚悶殡娮佑螒颉罢保珜?dǎo)國(guó)人轉(zhuǎn)變“視電子競(jìng)技為洪水猛獸”的心態(tài),而將其作為考驗(yàn)手腦并用能力的一項(xiàng)體育賽事項(xiàng)目。提煉觀點(diǎn):青少年對(duì)電子游戲的喜愛(ài)可轉(zhuǎn)移到為國(guó)爭(zhēng)光的競(jìng)技項(xiàng)目上?!?.文題擬定同學(xué)們擬定的作文題目可分為兩類:一類是能直接看出作者觀點(diǎn)的作文題目:如電子游戲危害青少年成長(zhǎng);沉迷電子游戲危害多……另一類是不能直接看出作者觀點(diǎn)的作文題目:如電子游戲之我見(jiàn);我看電子游戲……總的來(lái)說(shuō),大家直接亮明觀點(diǎn)的作文題目都是寫(xiě)電子游戲的危害的。沒(méi)有直接亮明作者觀點(diǎn)的作文題目是既寫(xiě)玩電子游戲的好處也寫(xiě)玩電子游戲的壞處的。其實(shí),很多事物并不是非黑即白的,我們可以把對(duì)電子游戲的認(rèn)識(shí)寫(xiě)得更全面、深刻些,讓人能從中明白新的道理。
當(dāng)然,知足常樂(lè)者,并不是說(shuō)這個(gè)人要安于現(xiàn)狀,沒(méi)有追求,沒(méi)有理想,而是要懂得適可而止,懂得取舍,懂得放棄,畢竟人的欲望是無(wú)限的。如《我的叔叔于勒》講述了這樣一個(gè)故事:年輕時(shí),于勒大肆揮霍,被看成是“禍水”,落得被掃地出門的地步。既至美洲,賺了小錢,兩年后又發(fā)了大財(cái),成為大家的“福星”。菲利普一家渴盼有錢的于勒歸來(lái),二姐也因此找到了未婚夫,一家人都很高興,出國(guó)到哲爾賽島旅行。他們?cè)诖蠀s見(jiàn)到一個(gè)酷似于勒的窮苦的賣牡蠣的人,菲利普先生在船長(zhǎng)那里得到了可怕的印證。不但發(fā)財(cái)?shù)膲?mèng)想化為烏有,進(jìn)入上流社會(huì)的美夢(mèng)成為泡影,而且眼下二女兒的婚事也岌岌可危,最后全家不動(dòng)聲色地改乘另一艘海輪回來(lái)。菲利普夫婦對(duì)于勒的態(tài)度完全建立在金錢之上,因此,他們的人生注定不會(huì)常樂(lè)。被稱為“古今隱逸詩(shī)人之宗”的陶淵明,在鄉(xiāng)野山林中,找到了人生樂(lè)趣。大名鼎鼎的詩(shī)仙李白,在不得志之時(shí),仍有“天生我材必有用,千金散盡還復(fù)來(lái)”的達(dá)觀之句。被林語(yǔ)堂先生稱為“無(wú)可救藥的樂(lè)天派”的蘇東坡雖一生坎坷,仍對(duì)生命和生活充滿熱愛(ài)。所以,知足者,常樂(lè)也。人們常說(shuō):“人生不如意事十之八九?!蹦敲次覀儾环痢俺O胍欢薄碛幸活w樂(lè)觀的心,才是我們成功的關(guān)鍵。
一、導(dǎo)入新課我們已經(jīng)學(xué)過(guò)魯迅先生的不少文章,學(xué)過(guò)他的小說(shuō),看他用無(wú)數(shù)生動(dòng)的形象表達(dá)他在時(shí)代里的“吶喊”與“彷徨”;學(xué)過(guò)他的散文,與他一同在失落中“朝花夕拾”,安靜地回憶過(guò)往。今天,我們將學(xué)習(xí)魯迅先生的一篇雜文,看他是如何作為民族斗士,將手中的筆,變成抨擊敵人的槍。二、教學(xué)新課目標(biāo)導(dǎo)學(xué)一:學(xué)習(xí)駁論,理清思路1.初讀課文,找出對(duì)方的錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn),并說(shuō)說(shuō)作者是怎樣引出這一觀點(diǎn)的。明確:對(duì)方的錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)是“中國(guó)人失掉自信力了”。開(kāi)篇以似乎確鑿的事實(shí)為據(jù),用一句話指出了三個(gè)階段中“中國(guó)人”表現(xiàn)出來(lái)的三種不同的態(tài)度:盲目驕傲,夜郎自大;盲目崇拜,借助外援;今不如昔,祈求鬼神。即由自夸到崇洋,到自欺欺人、虛無(wú)渺茫的態(tài)度變化。因此有人“慨嘆”:“中國(guó)人失掉自信力了?!边@是論敵的論點(diǎn)。
本單元主要是學(xué)習(xí)情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can的肯定句、否定句、一般疑問(wèn)句,肯定與否定回答,以及特殊疑問(wèn)句的構(gòu)成和用法;復(fù)習(xí)what弓!導(dǎo)的特殊疑問(wèn)句。本單元主要圍繞“加人俱樂(lè)部,談?wù)撟约旱哪芰Α边@一話題,設(shè)計(jì)了三個(gè)任務(wù)型活動(dòng):任務(wù)一是:自己的才藝表演,學(xué)習(xí)情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can的用法;任務(wù)二是:自己建立俱樂(lè)部,運(yùn)用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can談?wù)撟约涸谀骋环矫娴哪芰?、喜好和意愿;任?wù)三是:我能成功,主要是復(fù)習(xí)鞏固談?wù)摳髯缘膼?ài)好和特長(zhǎng)的方法。單元知識(shí)系統(tǒng)(樹(shù))Can you/he/she/you dance? 一Yes,I/he/she/we can./No,I/he/she/we can’t.Can Bill play the guitar?一Yes,he can,but he can’t sing.單元總體目標(biāo)通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can的用法,使學(xué)生能夠表達(dá)自己在某一方面所具備的才能;能夠談?wù)撟约旱南埠门c意愿;能夠?yàn)樽约撼闪⒌母鞣N俱樂(lè)部制作海報(bào);會(huì)寫(xiě)招聘廣告。單元重難點(diǎn)一覽重點(diǎn) 難點(diǎn)I.復(fù)習(xí)詞匯:can,play,want2.詞匯:guitar, dance, swim,sing, chess, speak, drum,trumpet,violin,play the guitar3.句型:Can you/he/she/you dance?Yes,I/he/she/we can./No,I/he/she/we can’t.Can Bill play the guitar?
本單元主要學(xué)習(xí)一周中星期一到星期天的表達(dá)方式;掌握學(xué)科的表達(dá);學(xué)習(xí)用because和表示品質(zhì)的形容詞表示理由;學(xué)習(xí)what,why,who引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問(wèn)句。本單元圍繞“談?wù)撟约核矚g的學(xué)科”這一話題,設(shè)計(jì)了三個(gè)任務(wù)型活動(dòng):任務(wù)一是:談?wù)撟约核矚g的學(xué)科,學(xué)習(xí)what引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問(wèn)句和學(xué)科的表達(dá);任務(wù)二是:一分鐘演講,讓學(xué)生介紹自己喜歡某一學(xué)科的理由,學(xué)習(xí)why等特殊疑問(wèn)句;任務(wù)三是:寫(xiě)信,鞏固和延伸所學(xué)知識(shí),掌握星期的表達(dá)方式。單元知識(shí)系統(tǒng)(樹(shù))What’s your/his/her favorite subject? My/His/Her favorite subject is English.Why do you like math. Because it’s interesting.Why does he/she like art? Because it’s fun.When do you have math? I have math 0n Monday,Wednesday and Friday.What’s Ken’s favorite subject? Science.單元總體目標(biāo)通過(guò)本單元的學(xué)習(xí)使學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)談?wù)撟约合埠玫膶W(xué)科或自己喜好的其它事情并給出理由;學(xué)會(huì)說(shuō)出一周的七天;學(xué)會(huì)合理地安排自己的作息時(shí)間。
一、知識(shí)和能力目標(biāo)本單元的核心教學(xué)內(nèi)容是“認(rèn)物”。用英語(yǔ)確認(rèn)周圍的常見(jiàn)事物比較符合英語(yǔ)初學(xué)者的實(shí)際情況。通過(guò)本單元教學(xué),使學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)句型,去熟悉周圍事物的名稱;教學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)在實(shí)際生活中如何確認(rèn)事物。通過(guò)辨認(rèn)物體,學(xué)生學(xué)到一些生詞,并鞏固所學(xué)句型。二、過(guò)程和方法目標(biāo)教師要盡量使學(xué)生對(duì)課文中出現(xiàn)的句型能夠熟練上口,這樣,學(xué)生才能順利開(kāi)展比較靈活的對(duì)話。教師可以用手勢(shì),表情,動(dòng)作等示意,幫助學(xué)生聽(tīng)懂課堂教學(xué)內(nèi)容,但在實(shí)際操作中應(yīng)盡量避免“明知故問(wèn)”的傾向,應(yīng)該采用應(yīng)用性原則;如:遮蓋物品、顯露局部、辨認(rèn)物體、完形識(shí)別、圖形辨認(rèn)等方法。三、情感態(tài)度和價(jià)值觀目標(biāo)目標(biāo)在學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中的作用至關(guān)重要,教師要幫助他們建立起一個(gè)切合自己實(shí)際的目標(biāo),通過(guò)漸進(jìn)的學(xué)習(xí)以及一點(diǎn)一滴的進(jìn)步,使他們逐步建立起成功感。成功越多,自信心就越強(qiáng)。
Step 3 (3b)First, tell the students when we talk about our future plans, we often use: I’m+verb+ing When we talk about what we must do, we use have to. Ask the students to fill in the blanks in 3b. The answers are: shopping, go to see, a test, I’m going, my family. Step 4 (3c)Let the students write an e-mail message to a friend. Say why you can’t visit next. Before the exercise, ask the students to give some possible answers and write them on the blackboard. So the students will feel easy to finish the writing exercise. After they finish it, Let them to correct it in groups first. Each group chooses theirs best one to read in front of the whole class. Step 5 ( planning a party )First read the conversation in the box together. Then ask the students to turn to page 88.Write down everything you have to do next week. Write in all the things you have to do . Ask the students to look at the list. Ask them “What day are you free?” This is when you can have your party. Step 6 (Self check 1 )Let the students to fill in the blanks with the words given. Change the forms of the words if possible. Then make their own sentences. The answers are: visit, playing, have to, study, comeStep 7 (Self check 2)Imagine you are Marie. Read the information and look at your schedule. Write replies to the invitation.
Step Ⅶ Role play ( Work on 1b)1. First ask two students to read the dialogue to the class.Sa: How do you get to school?Sb: Well, I ride my bike to the subway station. Then I take the subway.2. Now work with a partner.Suppose you use two kinds of transportation to get to school \Hangzhou\Beijing... (bus, train, subway, walking, bike, etc.) Tell how you get there. You may use the phrases in 1a.3. Then ask different pairs of students to present their conversations to the class.Step ⅧListening1. Work on 2a(1) First ask students to read the list of information that Thomas wants to know.…where Nina lives.…h(huán)ow far from school she lives.…h(huán)ow long it takes to get to school.…h(huán)ow she gets to school.…what she thinks of the transportation.(2) Tell students what transportation and bus stop mean.bus stop 汽車站 transportation n. 運(yùn)送;運(yùn)輸Then tell students we'll hear a recording. Please put a checkmark in front of each thing that Thomas wants to know.(3) Now play the recording for students.( Have students pay attention to the sample answer.) (4) Then correct the answers.
教學(xué)重點(diǎn)和難點(diǎn):運(yùn)用所掌握的語(yǔ)言描述,比較不同地點(diǎn)的特點(diǎn)。在練習(xí)中學(xué)習(xí)掌握英語(yǔ)比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的用法。課前準(zhǔn)備分配小組,每組五至六人。通過(guò)上網(wǎng)或翻閱報(bào)刊雜志等方法,確定旅游線路,做出基本的旅游計(jì)劃。教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì):本節(jié)課流程圖 學(xué)法指導(dǎo):1.由于這是一堂新課,在教學(xué)中應(yīng)注意面向全體,發(fā)揮學(xué)生的主體性,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生積極參與,激發(fā)學(xué)生的求知欲和學(xué)習(xí)積極性,指導(dǎo)學(xué)生積極思維,主動(dòng)獲取知識(shí),養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)方法。逐步學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立解決問(wèn)題??傊M可能調(diào)動(dòng)學(xué)生的非智力因素促進(jìn)智力因素的發(fā)展。教法選擇:1.電化教學(xué)法2.課堂討論法3.任務(wù)型教學(xué)法采用這些方法的目的是為了充分調(diào)動(dòng)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)積極性,使學(xué)生變被動(dòng)學(xué)習(xí)為主動(dòng)學(xué)習(xí)。通過(guò)電腦形象的演示,加強(qiáng)印象,提高興趣,突破難點(diǎn),提高教學(xué)效率,進(jìn)而增大教學(xué)的容量和信息量。充分體現(xiàn)教師為主導(dǎo),學(xué)生為主體的教學(xué)原則。
She shouldn’t go to the party tonight.Step7. TaskT: You know, there are lots of problems in our life. If you are a doctor, please tell us how to solve the problem. I will divide you into 9 groups. Please work in groups. And then choose one of you to report your ideas.The following are the problems:I have a toothache.I am hungry. I have a sore throat.I am stressed out. I have a sore back.I am tired. I can’t sleep.I have a cold. I have a headache.Report: If you have a headache, you should go to bed early. You should see the doctor. You should eat some medicine. You shouldn’t wash your face with cold water.You shouldn’t sleep late.You shouldn’t swim.…..T encourages the students to give advice as much as possible.Homework:1. Chose one of the problems, and write down your advice2. Copy the new words這一步是用于熱身的,同時(shí)也可以讓他們復(fù)習(xí)一部分的表示人體部位的單詞,擴(kuò)充知識(shí).學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言的過(guò)程也是一個(gè)不斷積累的過(guò)程,復(fù)習(xí)舊知識(shí),增添新知識(shí).通過(guò)小游戲,強(qiáng)化學(xué)生對(duì)Does she/he have…這個(gè)句子的運(yùn)用能力.通過(guò)復(fù)習(xí),自然的引到下面新知識(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)。充分利用表格,由句子到對(duì)話,再到文章,讓學(xué)生循序漸進(jìn). 提高學(xué)生的綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力,運(yùn)用以前學(xué)過(guò)的知識(shí)來(lái)解決身邊的問(wèn)題.Period 5 (Section B 3a—3c, selfcheck)教學(xué)內(nèi)容與分析:
Step 1 Greeting Greet the class and check the homeworkStep 2 A duty report The S on duty gives a report on the rules in his home and lead in 3a “Sun Fei’s and Wu Yu’s rules” Step 3 ReadingSs read the conversation and write the two girls’ rules in the chart. Check the answers.Get Ss to read after the tape and then read aloud by themselves. Then, T explains the language points.Step 4 Pairwork 3bRole play. Use the information in chart to practice with the conversation in 3a covered. They can look at the sample conversation in the right box.Step 5 Task 2 “Who’s the best reporter?”Make a survey by asking any 5 students the questions in the chart in activity 4. Then give out a report about it. See who is the best reporter? And the best reporter will get a nice ball-pen.Step 6 Summary and homework:Write out the report in your exercise-books.Period ThreeStep 1 Greeting and a duty reportThe S gives a duty report talking about his experience of being late for school. Lead in the question “Do you ever get to school late? How often do you get to school late? Always, usually, sometimes, or never?Step 2 1a Get Ss to finish writing.Step 3 Pairwork 1b Get Ss to talk about their answers with their partners using the sample conversation in the box on the right.Step 4 Listening practice2a Lead-in: What will happen if you get to school late? What about Peter? Let’s listen to a conversation between Peter and his father. Get Ss to finish 2a (As usual, for the first time, Ss only listen.) Check the answers.
內(nèi)容提示本單元主要內(nèi)容是學(xué)會(huì)利用verb十by/with gerund表示方式方法來(lái)討論學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的策略,認(rèn)識(shí)自己在學(xué)習(xí)方面的長(zhǎng)處和不足。初步了解現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的結(jié)構(gòu)和用法。現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)由助動(dòng)詞have/has+動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞構(gòu)成,主要表示過(guò)去發(fā)生的某一動(dòng)作對(duì)現(xiàn)在仍有影響或造成的后果,常與already,yet,just,ever,never等副詞連用。教學(xué)目標(biāo)一、學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)(Language Goal) 1. Talk about how to study . 學(xué)會(huì)討論各種學(xué)習(xí)方法和策略。2. Find out your suitable learning methods. 找出適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法。 二、語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)(Language Structures) 1. Verb + by with gerund by+動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ) 表示“通過(guò)…途徑,方法” 2. How questions have引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問(wèn)句 三、目標(biāo)語(yǔ)言(Target Language) 1. How do you study for tests ? 你是怎樣準(zhǔn)備考試的?Well , I study by working with my classmates. 哦,我和同學(xué)們一起學(xué)習(xí)。2. Have you ever studied with a group ? 你曾經(jīng)參加過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)小組嗎?Yes , I have . I’ve learned a lot that way . 是的,參加過(guò)。通過(guò)這種方式我學(xué)了許多。
一、Section A該部分有4個(gè)模塊。第一模塊圍繞Whose volleyball is this? 這一話題展開(kāi)思維( 1a)、聽(tīng)力(1b)、口語(yǔ)( 1c)訓(xùn)練;第二模塊圍繞上一模塊中的話題進(jìn)行聽(tīng)力( 2a-2b)、口語(yǔ)訓(xùn)練( 2c);第三模塊繼續(xù)圍繞前兩個(gè)模塊中的“making inferences”展開(kāi)訓(xùn)練。訓(xùn)練形式為閱讀排序( 3a)和兩人問(wèn)答(3b);第四模塊仍就上一話題展開(kāi)討論。二、Section B該部分有4個(gè)模塊。第一模塊要求根據(jù)圖畫(huà)和所提供的單詞寫(xiě)出合理的句子;第二模塊在聽(tīng)力( 2a-2b)和分角色口語(yǔ)訓(xùn)練( 2c)的基礎(chǔ)上,繼續(xù)進(jìn)行“推測(cè)”訓(xùn)練; 第三模塊圍繞“Strange events in Bell Tower neighborhood”這一話題展開(kāi)閱讀( 3a)和寫(xiě)作(3b -3c)訓(xùn)練;第四模塊以dream為話題展開(kāi)小組活動(dòng)。三、Self Check該部分有3個(gè)模塊。第一模塊以填空形式對(duì)所學(xué)詞匯進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練;第二模塊就8個(gè)諺語(yǔ)展開(kāi)閱讀和討論。
The First PeriodⅠ.Teaching Aims and DemandsKnowledge Objects(1) Key Vocabularytiring, educational, fascinating, thrilling, peaceful, exotic, trek, jungle, take it easy, explore, historic, site(2) Target LanguageWhere would you like to go on vacation?I’d like to trek through the jungle, because I like exciting vacations.2. Ability Objects(1)Train students to talk about places they would like to visit with the target language.(2)Train students to describe vacations with different adjectives.(3)Train students' listening skill.3. Moral Object,It′s more interesting to go on vacating somewhere instead of staying at home.Ⅱ. Teaching Key Points1. Key Vocabularytiring, educational, fascinating, thrilling, peaceful, exotic, trek, jungle, take it easy, explore, historic, site2. Target LanguageTalk about different places with the target language.Ⅲ. Teaching Difficult Points1. Describe vacations with different adjectives.2. Talk about different places with the target language.Ⅳ. Teaching Methods1. Teaching by illumination2. Teaching by doing chain drills3. Teaching by pairworkⅤ. Teaching Aids1. A tape recorder2. Some pictures of different places with famous views
學(xué)生閱讀欣賞教材第66頁(yè)王羲之的《蘭亭集序》和柳公權(quán)的《玄秘塔碑》,然后,教師引導(dǎo)學(xué)生說(shuō)說(shuō)自己喜歡的字體,并將課前搜集到的字帖或者自己的書(shū)法作品與同學(xué)分享。設(shè)計(jì)意圖:引導(dǎo)學(xué)生欣賞漢字的書(shū)法藝術(shù),體驗(yàn)書(shū)法的藝術(shù)美。環(huán)節(jié)三:課堂小結(jié),內(nèi)化提升學(xué)生談一談學(xué)習(xí)本節(jié)課的收獲,教師相機(jī)引導(dǎo)。設(shè)計(jì)意圖:梳理總結(jié),體驗(yàn)收獲與成功的喜悅,內(nèi)化提升學(xué)生的認(rèn)識(shí)與情感。環(huán)節(jié)四:布置作業(yè),課外延伸課后,以古老而優(yōu)美的漢字為主題辦一期手抄報(bào)。設(shè)計(jì)意圖:將課堂所學(xué)延伸到學(xué)生的日常生活中,有利于落實(shí)行為實(shí)踐。六、板書(shū)設(shè)計(jì)為了突出重點(diǎn),讓學(xué)生整體上感知本節(jié)課的主要內(nèi)容,我將以思維導(dǎo)圖的形式設(shè)計(jì)板書(shū):在黑板中上方的中間位置是課題《美麗文字,民族瑰寶》,下面是:直觀形象,生動(dòng)多姿;形體優(yōu)美,風(fēng)格迥異。
【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】本環(huán)節(jié)是為了突破難點(diǎn)而設(shè)計(jì),以名篇佳作為范例,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生理解什么叫作合理而大膽的想象,示范作用明顯。另外,本環(huán)節(jié)也是為下一環(huán)節(jié)——學(xué)生自由想象自己十年后的生活做鋪墊。三、寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐師:同學(xué)們,讓我們拿起筆,徜徉于聯(lián)想和想象的世界。1.學(xué)生寫(xiě)作課件出示:題目:你有沒(méi)有憧憬過(guò)未來(lái)的生活?你覺(jué)得,十年以后的你是什么樣子的呢?在做什么?又有著怎樣的精神面貌呢?請(qǐng)以《十年后的我》為題,發(fā)揮想象,寫(xiě)一篇作文。不少于500字。思路點(diǎn)撥:發(fā)揮大膽而豐富的想象,可從十年后的生活變化、社會(huì)發(fā)展變化等方面著手,塑造人物的變化,如人物的相貌、心態(tài)及性格等,但性格的發(fā)展一定要符合邏輯。寫(xiě)法指導(dǎo):選擇一件事或幾件事,通過(guò)語(yǔ)言、動(dòng)作等描寫(xiě)來(lái)展現(xiàn)人物的性格。寫(xiě)作中也可采用前后對(duì)比的手法,如現(xiàn)在的“我”性格暴躁,十年后的“我”性格溫順等,通過(guò)人物的變化來(lái)反映社會(huì)的變化。
三、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練1.明確題干要求師:閱讀教材P18的寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐三,讀讀題干和“提示”,然后集中討論一下,你是如何理解這個(gè)寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐暗含的要求的。預(yù)設(shè)(1)這個(gè)題目可以簡(jiǎn)單概括為成長(zhǎng)中的事件,范圍比較寬廣,類似于經(jīng)常碰到的《難忘的一件事》一類的作文題。(2)一定要注意“成長(zhǎng)”這個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞,在描述這個(gè)事件時(shí),一定要寫(xiě)出自己人生體悟的變化。(3)要選擇一件有意義的、使“我”成長(zhǎng)的事來(lái)寫(xiě),在文末還應(yīng)升華主題,寫(xiě)出自己在經(jīng)歷這件事后得到的人生啟示。2.補(bǔ)充寫(xiě)作提示師:為了幫助大家完成好這次習(xí)作,老師在教材的基礎(chǔ)上,還另外補(bǔ)充了三條“提示”。課件出示:提示:1.選材要小。選取生活中的一兩個(gè)片段來(lái)刻畫(huà)人物、表達(dá)感情。從小事入手,于細(xì)微處見(jiàn)精神,以小見(jiàn)大,突出“難忘”“印象深刻”。2.敘事要詳略得當(dāng)。敘事要圍繞中心,抓住重點(diǎn),把最能體現(xiàn)事件意義、最能展示人物形象的言行、心理描寫(xiě)得真實(shí)而詳細(xì)。同時(shí),要講究剪裁,選取典型的、能揭示事物本質(zhì)的、有說(shuō)服力的材料表達(dá)中心思想,做到詳略得當(dāng),主次分明。
中國(guó)女子跳水五位著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員“跳水女皇”高敏是我國(guó)首位奧運(yùn)跳板跳水金牌獲得者,自1986年奪得第一個(gè)國(guó)際比賽的冠軍以來(lái),一直到1992年退役,她包攬了其間包括世界杯、世錦賽和奧運(yùn)會(huì)在內(nèi)的所有國(guó)際比賽的70多個(gè)世界冠軍。跳水界的傳奇人物伏明霞年僅14歲就成了奧運(yùn)史上最年輕的冠軍,被載入吉尼斯世界紀(jì)錄。同時(shí),這位板臺(tái)雙冠王還是我國(guó)奧運(yùn)史上首位三連冠運(yùn)動(dòng)員?!疤屎蟆惫Ьв?993年進(jìn)入國(guó)家跳水隊(duì),2011年正式退役。她共收獲了包括世界杯、奧運(yùn)會(huì)、世錦賽和亞運(yùn)會(huì)等在內(nèi)的31個(gè)世界冠軍,是世錦賽史上唯一的五連冠得主。吳敏霞在1998年入選國(guó)家跳水隊(duì),一直被認(rèn)為是郭晶晶之后的我國(guó)跳水隊(duì)的又一位領(lǐng)軍人物。2016年,她收獲了個(gè)人的第五枚奧運(yùn)金牌,與鄒凱并列我國(guó)奧運(yùn)史上奪金最多的運(yùn)動(dòng)員。