一、說教材《開辟新航路》是高中《歷史·必修二》第5課的內(nèi)容。從三個方面向?qū)W生介紹了歐洲人開辟新航路的歷史:即新航路開辟的原因和條件、新航路開辟經(jīng)過以及影響。前4課內(nèi)容介紹了古代中國經(jīng)濟的基本結(jié)構(gòu)與特點,從第5課開始學(xué)習(xí)資本主義世界市場的形成和發(fā)展。本課內(nèi)容相當重要,上承古代中國,下啟近代世界。新航路的開辟,打破了世界相對隔絕的狀態(tài),世界真正開始融合為一個整體。從此,以西歐為中心的世界市場的雛形開始出現(xiàn)。隨后的殖民擴張,世界市場拓展;第一次工業(yè)革命,世界市場基本形成;第二次工業(yè)革命,世界市場發(fā)展。二、說目標1、課程標準概述迪亞士、哥倫布開辟新航路的史實,認識地理大發(fā)現(xiàn)對世界市場形成的意義。2、三維目標①知識與能力:掌握新航路開辟的原因、經(jīng)過、影響。②過程與方法:引導(dǎo)學(xué)生分析原因及影響,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生分析和歸納問題的能力。③情感態(tài)度與價值觀:A、通過對新航路開辟過程的學(xué)習(xí),使學(xué)生感受和學(xué)習(xí)探險家們勇于進取的開拓精神。B、通過學(xué)習(xí)新航路開辟的影響,使學(xué)生認識新航路開辟促進了人類社會的整體發(fā)展。
Then I would ask them to think of a funny English or Chinese and tell it to partners. While telling stories, they can use expressions and some acting to help make the story funny. 5 minutes would be given to do this.Those stories they told there will be the material for their writing. Soletting them tell it at first is helpful. And they can make a difference between telling a funny story and writing it down. Generally speaking, it is difficult forstudents to write well because they don’t know what to write and how to write. Asking them to tell their own stories at first can help them come up with what to write.After their telling, I would invite someone to share his/her story with all of us and I would write it down on the blackboard.This example story would be used as a sample to illustrate the format of funny story. Different from a story from teacher or textbook, a story from students can obviously become a interesting material to draw students’ attention.Then I would ask the whole class to put this story into several parts. It might be a little bit difficult for them. So I would ask them to find out whether all the sentences are necessary. After delete some sentences, there are 6 sentences left behind. Then they can easily put them into three parts. After interaction with students, I would teach them the right terms for each part and conclude the format of funny story.This step is the key and difficult point in my lesson. So I mainly usetask-based teaching method in this part and the task for students was divided into several stages. With the separated difficult level, students can find there are usually three parts in writing. They can also learn to write without the unnecessary parts in the process of analyzing. And then I wouldn’t rush to tell them the right terms to them directly. Instead, I would ask them to name them by their own. A confused mind is better for acquiring knowledge.While-writing:Then I would give students 7 minutes to write down this story, without other requirements.With all the preparations in pre-writing, students’ difficulties were cleared. So it would be much easier for them to write down the story within 7 minutes. There are no other requirements because students’ first writing is actually a drafting. It would be revise and edit several times later. Writing, as a skill
Good afternoon, teachers, It’s my great pleasure to be here sharing my lesson with you.The content of my lesson is Senior English Book 3 Unit 5 Canada —— “The true North”.I’ll be ready to begin this lesson from five parts. Analysis of the teaching material,the teaching methods,the studying methods, the teaching procedure,and Blackboard design.First, let me talk about the teaching material.Part 1 Teaching Material:This unit is about the introduction of Canada. By studying of this unit,we’ll enable the students to learn the geography, population, main cities, and natural beauty, natural resources of Canada. Through the training of the unit, it also requires students to learn some Language skills such as the expressions of position and emotions.So it plays an important part in the English teaching in this book.After studying the teaching material and analyzing the rule of children’s growing of mind,I think the teaching aims are the followings:1.Knowledge objects:(1) make the students learn some new words and phrases(2) make the students understand the content of the lesson.2.Ability objects:(1)To develop the Ss’ abilities of listening, speaking, reading and writing. Especially reading and speaking ability.(2) learn to talk about the characters of Canada in English(3)To train the Ss’ ability of working in pairs.3.Emotion objects:(1)Enable students to understand the characters of Canada..(2)Stimulate Ss to work hard to make China stronger.Part 2 Teaching Methods:I think helping students learn to master new words and phrases and improve the students’ reading and speaking ability is import and the difficult.According to the analysis of the teaching material and the import points and the difficult points,I will use the following teaching methods : question-guiding approach; fast-reading and careful reading; multi-media teaching methods; discussion
Knowledge objectives:(1) to make Ss grasp the usage of words, expressions and sentence structures: statistics, struggle, thanks to, rid of, some patterns for persuasion, the “ing” form as subject and object;(2)to use learnt knowledge to persuade sb.Ability objectives:(1) to develop Ss’ reading skills(skimming, scanning, word guessing);(2) to improve Ss’ speaking, communicating and cooperating skills.Emotional objectives:to make Ss know the contribution of Yuan,and learn his spirit and his simple life time.Teaching important and difficult points:(1) some words, expressions and sentence structures mentioned above;(2)the content of the text;(3)training their reading and speaking skills.Teaching methods: CLT, TBLT,QT.Learning strategies: CLS, QLS, TBLS.Teaching procedures:Step 1 lead-in: (1) teacher plays a piece of recent news from CCTV about the harvest of the super hybrid rice, and ask students whether they know Yuan or not, and talk about him and his contribution.(2)Brain storm: let Ss describe Yuan in their minds including his appearance, his living condition and so on.Step 2 fast reading tasks:(1)teacher introduces Yuan and super hybrid rice(2)make Ss read the text as fast as possible with questions. Such as: what’s the general ideaof this passage? What’s Yuan’ dream? (skimming and scanning skill)Step 3 intensive reading tasks(1)let Ss read the text silently, find topic sentence of each paragraph and draw the difficult sentences and the knowledge what they don’t understand.(words guessing)(2)teacher and Ss talk about the important words, expressions and sentences together, and ask Ss to retell the content of the text.(summarizing and paraphrasing)(3)teacher summarize this part.(4) read again following the courseware.
一. 教材分析1. 本單元的中心話題是“計算機(Computers)”,內(nèi)容涉及計算機的發(fā)展歷史,計算機的應(yīng)用等。本節(jié)課是該單元的第一課時,我將Warming up, Pre-reading and Comprehending這四部分整合為一節(jié)精讀課。其中。Reading部分是題為WHO AM I?的文章,以第一人稱的擬人手法介紹了計算機發(fā)長演變的歷史和計算機在各個領(lǐng)域的應(yīng)用,其主旨是表達計算機的發(fā)展變化之快以及在生活中用途之廣。而Warming up部分以圖片的形式展現(xiàn)了計算機的發(fā)展歷程;Pre-reading中的問題和排序分別是為了預(yù)測語篇的內(nèi)容和測試學(xué)生對計算機歷史了解的情況;Comprehending則通過各項練習(xí)訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的閱讀技能,從而加深對文章的理解??梢娺@幾部分是一個有機的整體。2. 教學(xué)目標:1) 語言目標:重點詞匯及短語:abacus, calculate, calculator, PC, laptop, PDA, robot, analytical, technological, universal, mathematical, artificial, intelligent, network, explore, in common, as a result.重點句子:a. My real father was Alan Turing, who in 1963 wrote a book to describe how computers could be made to work, and build a “universal machine” to solve any mathematical problem.
Language learning needs a context, which can help the learners to understand the language and then can product comprehensible output, so computer has the advantages to make the materials attractive.Part 3 Learning MethodsTask-based, self-dependent and cooperative learningPart 4 Teaching ProcedureStep One Lead-in“Interest is the best teacher.” Therefore, at the very beginning of the class, I should spark the students’ mind to focus on the centre topic “the band”. I’ll show some pictures of food to attract their attention and then bring some questions.Question:What kind of food they like?What should go into a good meal?The answers must relate to the diet. After this, the students will be eager to know something about a balance diet and this is the very time to naturally lead the class into Step 2Step 2 Reading for information: skimming and scanning In this step, I use Task-based Language Teaching method, which can give students a clear and specific purpose while skimming and scanning the context.Task 1 General ideaThe students will be asked to just glance at the title and the pictures of the passage, and then guess what they will read in the text. And they’ll be divided into groups of four to have a discussion.The purpose is to inspire the students to read actively, not passively. In addition, the task is to develop the students’ reading skill by making prediction and to encourage the students to express their thoughts in English and cooperate with each other.Task 2 Main idea of each paragraphCooperative learning can raise the students’ interest and create an atmosphere of achievement. Based on this theory, I divide the whole class into 4 groups to skim the whole text and get the main idea of each paragraph.
一、教材分析1、教學(xué)對象分析《再別康橋》的教學(xué)對象是高一學(xué)生,高一學(xué)生往往對那種純粹的、原始的、本真的情感體會較為膚淺,《再別康橋》是新月派詩人徐志摩的傳世之作,有極高美學(xué)價值,它所抒發(fā)的離愁別緒是人類共同的情感經(jīng)歷,通過誦讀容易將學(xué)生帶人詩境,喚醒他們沉寂的真情,從而引起強烈的共鳴。 2、教材地位及作用 高中語文第一冊第一單元為詩歌單元,本單元收錄了中國現(xiàn)當代的一些優(yōu)秀詩篇。《再別康橋》安排在本單元的第二課,屬于必讀課。雖然本詩向來眾說紛紜,但其藝術(shù)之美人所共知,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生高尚的審美情趣和良好的審美創(chuàng)造力是語文學(xué)科的任務(wù),因此,從語言賞析入手,從情感體驗切入,就可以讓學(xué)生通過學(xué)習(xí)本課體會現(xiàn)代詩歌的特點,多方面感受體悟詩歌的情感,受到美的熏陶。
“深入探究,把握主旨”這一步則是解決教學(xué)的重點難點,這里涉及到課文的深層意蘊,學(xué)生理解有難度,教師在通過問題引領(lǐng)學(xué)生探討的基礎(chǔ)上,還要適時啟發(fā)、點撥,因為教學(xué)時間有限,讓學(xué)生漫無邊際的討論,可能難以完成預(yù)定的教學(xué)任務(wù),會使教學(xué)過程不完整。至于本文的寫作特點的教學(xué)視時間而定,有時間可以讓學(xué)生說一說,沒有時間用小黑板出示一下,讓學(xué)生了解就行,如果時間不夠,甚至可以不講。第三階段是“延伸練習(xí),鞏固提高”。
一、說教材1.教材分析《涉江采芙蓉》是新人教版必修二第二單元《古詩三首》中的一首?!豆旁娛攀住吩谥袊糯姼璧乃囆g(shù)手法上起著承前啟后的作用,在高中語文古詩教學(xué)中也起著承前啟后的作用。這首古體詩不論是藝術(shù)上,還是在思想上都已經(jīng)達到了十分純熟的境界。因此,它十分重要。2.說學(xué)情這首詩歌在內(nèi)容上難度不大,可以做多角度解讀。新課程標準鼓勵學(xué)生作個性化解讀,我們可以引導(dǎo)學(xué)生就此作些探討。學(xué)生通過小學(xué)、初中的系統(tǒng)學(xué)習(xí)和本冊古詩部分的集中學(xué)習(xí),有了一定的古詩鑒賞能力,對源遠流長的中華文化也有了一些積淀,興趣漸濃,這是進一步引導(dǎo)學(xué)生熱愛古代詩歌、學(xué)習(xí)古代詩歌的一個前提。3.教學(xué)目標依據(jù)學(xué)生特點,教材特色以及新課標的要求,制定教學(xué)目標如下:(用多媒體展示)1、了解關(guān)于《古詩十九首》的文學(xué)常識;2、感受詩歌的思想內(nèi)涵;3、運用想象描摹詩歌的藝術(shù)畫面。
三、文本中的句子解決完畢,大家對文本內(nèi)容的理解更加深入了。請速度文本,思考:《論語》具體涉及了哪些方面的內(nèi)容,體現(xiàn)了孔子什么觀點?明確:主要有治學(xué)、從政、修身養(yǎng)性和交友治道等方面,體現(xiàn)了孔子“克己復(fù)禮”的思想。四、 教師引導(dǎo)學(xué)生討論: 如何評價孔子的言行和觀點?從古至今人們對孔子有哪些評價?明確:1、春秋戰(zhàn)國時代, 孔子門人及其后學(xué)者均推尊孔子。門人中以子貢為代表,他對孔子贊美備至,奉如天人,把孔子比擬為高天、日月、木鐸,凡人是永遠不可企及的,認為孔子是天生的圣人,“仰之彌高,鉆之彌堅”。亞圣孟子認為孔子所行的“圣人之道”是遍及自然界和社會的至高準則。然而當時民間一般看法認為孔子是博學(xué)成名的大學(xué)者。
明確:(1)結(jié)繩記事說。原始記事的一種方法。人類在沒有發(fā)明文字或文字使用尚不普遍時,常用在繩索或類似物件上打結(jié)的方法記錄數(shù)字,表達某種意思,用以傳達信息,處理事件。 (2)書畫說。(3)倉頡造字說。中國自古就有倉頡造字之說。文字的發(fā)明是人類發(fā)展史上一件石破天驚的大事,它將人們的思維、語言、經(jīng)驗以及復(fù)雜的社會現(xiàn)象記錄下來,使文化得以傳播交流、世代傳承。2、漢字的形體:中華民族五千年的歷史中,漢字的演變,從甲骨文--金文--大篆--小篆--隸書--草書--楷書--行書,字形由象形到點橫豎撇捺的方塊字,經(jīng)歷了漫長的歲月。其中凝聚著民族的智慧,也體現(xiàn)出漢字逐步完善的過程,凸顯其方方正正、四平八穩(wěn)的特點。漢字又是一種文化的體現(xiàn),那些經(jīng)過藝術(shù)處理的漢字或跳起了拉丁舞、有的如同酒醉的成龍打起了醉拳,更是讓我們感到的是在欣賞漢字在紙張上跳舞,所以:書法是“紙上的舞蹈”。請大家看到書上的相關(guān)內(nèi)容,注意每一種形體的漢字的載體是什么,其功能又有什么不一樣。
一、說教材《短歌行》是普通高中課程標準實驗教科書必修(二)第二單元的一篇略讀課文,本單元安排的是先秦到南北朝時期的詩歌?!抖谈栊小肥侵渭?、軍事家、文學(xué)家曹操的作品。詩中抓住“憂”字來寫詩人為什么“憂”,如何解“憂”,從而表達希望能夠招攬人才、完成統(tǒng)一天下的雄心壯志。所以本單元安排《短歌行》一詩,對學(xué)生全面了解曹操,感受曹操在短暫的人生中竭力創(chuàng)造偉業(yè)的氣概。二、說學(xué)生我這一課的教學(xué)對象是高一學(xué)生。他們進入高中學(xué)習(xí)的時間只有三個多月,現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)完成了必修(一)的學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)習(xí)了現(xiàn)代詩歌單元,有了一定的詩歌學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ),初步掌握了讀詩的基本方法,但是還未能形成成熟的穩(wěn)定的學(xué)習(xí)方式。同時,本單元學(xué)習(xí)是高中第一次接觸古代詩歌,詩歌語言上的障礙和時間上的跨度對他們來說都是學(xué)習(xí)上的困難。因此教師要引導(dǎo)學(xué)生自主學(xué)習(xí),合作學(xué)習(xí),為他們設(shè)置新的學(xué)習(xí)情境,提供合作探究的機會。
(一)解題:包身工──舊社會一種變相的販賣奴隸的形式。被販賣的多是女孩子由承辦人送到工廠做工,無人身自由,所得工資全部歸承辦人所有,在這種形式下做工的人也稱包身工。包身工是指二三十年代(時間),在上海東洋紗廠里(地點),為外國人工作的女工(工作性質(zhì))。因為這些女工在進廠時已經(jīng)簽訂了賣身契,失去了人身的自由權(quán),所以被稱為“包身工”。標題中的“包身”二字,突出了帝國主義、封建勢力對中國女童工的殘酷剝削的罪行,控訴了他們的野蠻殘暴的統(tǒng)治手段,以激起人們的義憤和同情,這是全文的中心思想。(二)關(guān)于報告文學(xué):《包身工》屬于報告文學(xué)。(同類題材有初中的《地質(zhì)之光》、《誰是最可愛的人》)報告文學(xué),是文學(xué)體裁的一種,散文的一類,是文藝通訊、速寫、特寫的總稱,是文學(xué)創(chuàng)作中的“輕騎兵”。
探究、討論、交流:1、包弟討人喜歡,作者卻不得不將它送走,為什么?2、送走包弟后,作者為什么先是感覺輕松,隨后覺得沉重?3、“您的小狗怎樣?”這句話反復(fù)出現(xiàn),有什么用意?4、“整整十三年零五個月過去了”“整整”一詞有什么作用?5、“滿園的創(chuàng)傷使我的心仿佛又給放在油鍋里熬煎”這句話如何理解?6、“我懷念包弟,我想向它表示歉意?!比绾卫斫??學(xué)生各抒己見后教師結(jié)合材料發(fā)表看法明確總結(jié)特別是最后一個問題得出作者這發(fā)之心底的語言,不僅僅是歉意,更是發(fā)自靈魂深處的懺悔!是對生命的尊重,是一個有良知的作家對反省歷史的呼號。第三環(huán)節(jié)“認識你自己”——懺悔意識與我引導(dǎo)學(xué)生正視和反省成長過程中曾犯下過錯。并布置課后作業(yè):要求學(xué)生課后在本周隨筆中談反省懺悔后的感受。
4、本文的重點是說辭,雖僅百余字,卻委婉曲折,步步進逼,層層深入,表現(xiàn)出高超的勸說藝術(shù)、游說技巧。讓學(xué)生細細品味并概括說辭中包含幾層意思。第一層(“秦、晉圍鄭,鄭既知亡矣”),分析形勢,以退為進,博得好感。第二層(“若亡鄭而有益于君”至“君之薄也”),亡鄭陪鄰,動搖聯(lián)盟。第三層(“若舍鄭以為東道主”至“君亦無所害”),存鄭有益,利益引誘。第四層(“且君嘗為晉君賜矣”至“唯君圖之”),追溯歷史,深入離間??梢姞T之武面對大國的君主,巧舌如簧,不卑不亢,從容辭令,既不刺激對方也不失本國尊嚴,語言的分寸掌握得恰到好處。表現(xiàn)出燭之武機智善辯的外交才能。5、面對風(fēng)云突變的局勢,晉侯沒有感情用事,而表現(xiàn)了清醒的頭腦和理智的判斷。這種隱忍不發(fā)、隨機應(yīng)變的胸懷和謀略,正是晉文公終成霸業(yè)的根本原因。設(shè)計意圖:本環(huán)節(jié)的重點是全面把握燭之武這一人物性格特征,以及退秦師過程中體現(xiàn)出的非凡的膽識以及高超的謀略和語言藝術(shù)。
(三)教學(xué)重、難點1、教學(xué)重點:結(jié)合課文,了解演講辭針對性強、條理清楚、通俗易懂、適當?shù)母星樯实忍攸c。2、教學(xué)難點:深入理解文章內(nèi)涵,聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實,體會本文的現(xiàn)實意義二、說學(xué)情高中學(xué)生在初中階段已經(jīng)接觸過演講辭了,對演講詞的特點已經(jīng)有了一些基本的知識,因此本輪的教學(xué)應(yīng)該讓他們在此基礎(chǔ)上有所提高。本文是學(xué)生在高中階段第一次接觸演講辭,有必要讓他們了解演講辭的特點及課文如何體現(xiàn)這些特點的。隨著年齡的增長,生活閱歷的增加,高中學(xué)生正逐漸形成自己對世界、對人生的看法,蔡元培先生的這篇文章能很好地激發(fā)他們對當前的高中學(xué)習(xí)和未來的大學(xué)生活進行思考。此外,學(xué)生對北大的歷史及蔡元培先生作這番演講的時代背景了解不深,應(yīng)作出補充說明。
(幻燈六)巴金作品《家》描寫的是“五四”之后,成都地區(qū)一個封建大家庭走向崩潰的故事。故事集中在1920年冬到1921年秋的八九個月時間里。成都的一個官僚地主家庭高公館,一家之主的高老太爺,封建專制,頑固不化。長房長孫覺新,為人厚道,卻很軟弱,原與梅表姐相愛,后屈從于老太爺之命而與李瑞玨結(jié)婚。后來梅和瑞玨雙雙慘死。覺新的胞弟覺民、覺慧積極參加愛國運動,從而和馮公館的馮樂山成了死對頭。覺民愛上琴,馮樂山卻要他娶自己的侄孫女,在覺民覺慧的反抗下,他們終于取得勝利。覺慧愛上聰明伶俐的婢女鳴鳳,但馮樂山卻指名要娶鳴鳳為妾,鳴鳳堅決不從,投湖自盡…至此,覺新有所覺醒,而覺慧則毅然脫離家庭,投身革命。(故事主要以高家三兄弟的愛情遭際為線索。)
二、文本解讀方法點撥研讀課文第三、第四段。要求:師范讀,生輕聲跟讀,然后生齊讀。方法:第三段秦統(tǒng)一天下前,應(yīng)用較強的語勢讀出,充分渲染塑造一個“威加海內(nèi)”的帝王形象。統(tǒng)一天下之后,秦王朝至此已達頂峰,這意味著從此轉(zhuǎn)入守勢。這段文字義正詞嚴,充分揭露了秦的暴虐無道,故誦讀應(yīng)有“聲討”之勢。末句“天下已定”總承以上內(nèi)容,其后應(yīng)有較長停頓,然后轉(zhuǎn)入敘秦始皇的心態(tài),用以反襯下文滅亡之速,讀時須有嘲諷意,突出“自以為”“萬世之業(yè)”等詞語。第四段起首“始皇既沒,余威震于殊俗”兩句,暗示民心不服,人人自危,宜用從容、沉著的語調(diào)讀出。“然陳涉甕牖繩樞之子……”急轉(zhuǎn)直下,稍作停頓,以下先抑(“陳涉”至“之富”)后揚(“躡足”至段末)宜讀出對比情調(diào)。末句敘事結(jié)束全篇,要讀得沉著、有力。三、信息篩選學(xué)生自譯課文(一)學(xué)生參照文下注釋,口譯第三、四段,遇有疑難則作好相應(yīng)標記,為討論做好準備。
2、黛玉進入賈府到賈母處,她看到了什么?提示:從榮府西角門進去,走“一射之地”,轉(zhuǎn)至垂花門,過穿堂,繞插屏,再經(jīng)三間過廳,后面方是賈母居住的正房大院。“正面五間上房,皆雕梁畫棟,兩邊穿山游廊廂房,掛著各色鸚鵡、畫眉等鳥雀?!边@樣穿堂過廳一路行來,仆役、婆子、丫環(huán)輪番更換,的確給人以侯門深似海的感覺。然而賈母居處還不是正內(nèi)室。3、黛玉去拜見二舅舅時又看到什么?提示:往東?!按┻^一個東西的穿堂,向南大廳之后,儀門內(nèi)大院落,上面五間大正房,兩邊廂房鹿頂耳房鉆山,四通八達,軒昂壯麗”。堂屋中迎面“一個赤金九龍青地大匾,匾上寫著斗大的三個大字,是‘榮禧堂’,后有一行小字:‘某年月日,書賜榮國公賈源’,又有‘萬幾宸翰之寶’?!蔽輧?nèi)擺設(shè)有名貴的家具,珍貴的字畫、古玩。“又有一副對聯(lián),乃烏木聯(lián)牌,鑲著鏨銀的字跡,道是:座上珠譏昭日月,堂前黼黻煥煙霞?!庇商梦葸M入東耳房,這里是起居室,另有一番布置,再到東廊三間小正房王夫人的住室,又別有擺設(shè)。
【參考】“滄海月明珠有淚,藍田日暖玉生煙?!睖婧V械恼渲橹挥性诿髟轮梗拍芰飨戮К摰臏I花;藍田下的美玉只有在日暖之時,才能升騰飄逸的煙霞。物猶如此,人當如是?!皽婧T旅鳌迸c“藍田日暖”優(yōu)美意境的創(chuàng)設(shè),不僅僅是詩人精妙絕倫藝術(shù)素養(yǎng)的表現(xiàn)和揮灑,更是詩人回答人生價值的標準和尺度。詩人以物推人,拓展深化了詩作的主題,整篇的閃光點在此,魂亦在此。【參考】“此情可待成追憶,只是當時已惘然?!弊窇涍^去,盡管自己以一顆浸滿血淚的真誠之心,付出巨大的努力,去追求美好的人生理想,可“五十弦”如玉的歲月、如珠的年華,值得珍惜之時卻等閑而過;面對現(xiàn)實:戀人生離、愛妻死別、盛年已逝、抱負難展、功業(yè)未建……,幡醒悟之日已風(fēng)光不再。如泣如訴的悲劇式結(jié)問,又讓詩人重新回到對“人生價值到底是什么?到底該怎樣實現(xiàn)?”深深的思考和迷惑之中,大大增強了詩作的震撼力。